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Re: Imagine how the person above you looks like by their avatar
Vwahhah! The new art of fortune telling, not palm reading, but avatar reading!!! Tall, lanky with dark chocolate brown hair and olive skin and gleaming bronze-colored eyes that shine golden ...
Jan 23, 2009 -
Re: A Bird In Katie's Head:part three
This is part three. Enjoy! ............... An angry squint and a hand movement showed her to follow the assistant teacher back into the building. "Katie?" A voice from behind drove ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: 1) The Quantum Hole: power they couldn't have imagined
his is my first really serious scifi, which is a genre I rarely attempt. I love science but tend to use it in a very focused way, very specific, less ...
Jan 21, 2009 -
Re: A Mind-Boggling Malady: Dystonic Reaction
This is a completely true story. of course, I don't remember the exact dialogue, but it's pretty darn close to it. So read if you're interested. Feedback is welcomed. ................. ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Tell us the last thing you said in your mind (thoughts)
What the...what? My dog has soft ears. And he is absolutely pathetic when he looks up at you with these cute little brown eyes that are so pleading. But he ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Triwing: Image of My Characters...windows paint
a picture of my two characters in the Triwing pieces I've been doing, based on the Maximum Ride series by James Patterson.
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: A Confession of Sorts: Life with Tourette's Syndrome
"Hiccup...shisharkshifu--hiccup-roo" I bark, then pant like a dog. this. is. life. for. me. period. A big evil laugh here and there, spurting "excellent-----Monday------excelent..." I hop thrice on ea
Jan 18, 2009 -
Re: What would YOU do?
I'd...invite them somewhere, and in the parking lot, close my eyes and tell them to run around me in a circles, and tell them to run. Whatever happened would happen. ...
Jan 17, 2009 -
Re: Australia
I'm American, and not too great at geography... I think of kangaroo, deserts, that big rock thing that's like a mesa, but bigger where tourists watch the sunset, people have ...
Jan 17, 2009 -
Re: Skies Labeled Lost
I don't want to sound harsh, I'm just critiquing, so here goes.. 1: there is an inherent lack of punctuation. Look it up here at YWS in that search box. ...
Jan 17, 2009 -
Re: The Poppy in my Garden.
Okay. I am very blunt and down to business, so any harsh criticism, please don't take it personally...I am just trying to make this poem better... 1: you use way ...
Jan 17, 2009 -
Re: In an Eggshell
Wow. I'd do it in all capitals if it wasn't sort of prohibited. ;) I'll gush over how the poem moves me first, then criticize. It's a sad poem to ...
Jan 17, 2009 -
Re: I Have Been
i will go through and essentially comment on all the things I find to be worth mentioning. Please don't take the critcism as an insult..It's just suggestions. So here I ...
Jan 17, 2009 -
Re: Holiday Madness
It might be that I'm sort of a country girl, but I liked the ones you took called Ice, the fern, and the brighter leaf. Framing the Sun was probably ...
Jan 17, 2009 -
Re: part two, Shocked, mystery/suspense
Here it is. ................... Part two: a body in the kitchen Shannon Morris stood outside her biology teacher’s house, ringing the doorbell. She was scheduled to have lunch and tutor ...
Jan 16, 2009
